I received a letter this morning from
World Villages for Children.
Attached to the letter was a yellow, hand-written, post-it note and 12p (in the form of two 5p coins and one 2p coin stuck down with tape). Also included was a donation form and a freepost envelope in which to send it back. This letter was one of the cleverest direct-mail campaigns i've seen in some time. It began:
"I am forwarding to you 12p because I am desperate, and must take the risk that some people may choose note to send the coins back to me."
The letter then continues to explain that the writer, Sister Michaela of a Children's village in Guatemala, really needs the money to keep her children's village open. She explains the case of a young child, Dion, with a horrible history who, like many other of her children, risk being evicted into poverty if I can't donate £10.12p - (cue the 12p) - which it costs to feed, care and education children for a week. If I do send this money, they promise to send me a colourful bag of six little 'worry dolls'.
I like this letter a lot because it works on so many levels. First the money gets my attention. I want to know why any company would send me money. I discover this money is coming from the people who need it most. They ask if I can send it back, and explain why. There's a strong guilt element if I refuse to send the 12p back to her, but if i'm going to do that it lets them know that a) The letter reached the right person and b) I read the letter and followed its instructions. Almost.
Which leads to the next point. If i'm going to make the effort to send the 12p back, I might as well fill in the form asking for a one-off donation of £10 right? Next, the letter reads well, it makes sense. The cost (£10.12p) sounds specific, more honest than just £10.
Finally I get a reward, these colourful 'worry dolls' which I could put in the house. "What are they for?" "It's for the Guatemalan children i'm helping through my charity work!".
Next, the freepost return envelope is always a good idea. Us students don't come by stamps, envelopes or even pens and papers, easily. If I was going to pick one slight hole in the letters logic, it would be that the currency in Guatelama is the quetzal, not the pound sterling. But that's just being picky.
On the whole this is a very clever direct mail campaign. Let that be a lesson to other companies sending me mail. If you REALLY want my attention, include money.